A Robotic Boy//Felidae//Hisoka[FINISHED]

[foxlily]

~~
There once was a boy
A robotic boy
With a crank sticking out of his brain
~~

Name:
Hisoka
Age:
2 years
Gender:
Male
Group:
Felidae
Rank:
Ace

Personality:
Flirtatious is one word that fully describes this tom cat. Always following after the ladies and flirting with them even when all they want is for him to go away. He wants to be in the center of everyone's attention. He needs to be. Not matter what it takes he needs to be on top. Popularity and love run high on the scale for him because deep down he is nothing more than insecure. His past lingers deep within him haunting him always. He wants to prove himself to everyone and show that he is needed. He has to be unique and stand out. He has to be loved and remembered. He needs to show that his life is worth having. Of all things, he need to show he must not be compared to anyone. He can act no other way than this for this is how he has programmed himself to be and he must never show his weaknesses.
Likes
Flirting
She-cats
Love
Attention
Standing out
Popularity

Dislikes
Being compared
Being ignored
Loneliness
His past
Judgment


Appearance:
A smooth rusty ginger coat covers his slender body. The fur length short yet grow longer at his tail where the fur spreads like feathery strands. The tips of said tail are a lighter almost cream color that also appears under his jaw. Small white streaks are visible on his cheeks. Long legs complement his slender body and give him a boost in speed. His eyes are colored like that of moss. His most notable feature is four long scar across his chest.

History:
Hisoka was born to a young queen along with one other kit, his twin brother. Ever since birth the two were always mistaken for one other even by their own mother to the point see would call both over if she only needed one. Though his brother didn't mind it and merely brushed off the confusion, Hisoka couldn't stand it and he always looked for ways to be different. During early joker hood this did indeed happen but not in the way he had hoped. While he struggled with training his twin excelled. People started to like him more and more including their own mother. On certain occasions other would approached Hisoka only to have mistaken him for his brother. He utterly hated it. One day he and his brother went out for a hunt together only to run across a dog. Hisoka's twin was killed while he fled. In anger at himself he ran his own claws across his chest leaving four scars. When he returned he told them his brother was dead and the dog had caused his wounds. From then on everyone knew who Hisoka was only cause his twin was dead and he had the scars. Not long after his mother had died from illness. From the moment on , he change his personality completely. He would no longer be compared to his dead twin and he would be that lingering shadow. He would stand out and show his worth.

Got a drawing/picture of them? Link:
For now the pic above but I will draw a picture

Comments?:
Originally this was a lot better and more detailed but I lost everything so know its not as good..

~~
He never preformed
With sadness or joy
We was just simply programed to sing
~~

[foxlily]

Finished finally!!

[deertrot]

Hi Foxlily! Great job, but before you're accepted please fix a couple things:

- There's a typos in the sentence "He has to be love and remembered." and "Hisoka's twin was killed well he fled"
- There's a grammatical error in the sentence "The tips of said tail a lighter almost cream cover that also appears under his jaw." and "Well he struggled with training his twin excelled."

[foxlily]

Hmm... I think I got them all now o3o